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"Shall I Breath On You [ Games Juxaposition]"
  by Guey2


Flow hard who said he writes
supplying fat n steady bites
im the game's cellulite
style make the heavy light
toddler mcs get loogies
in their Pedalyte
make the haters Betty White retire
pen strokes lower esteem
u like am i throwing a dream
no Notre Dame aint my team
this flow aint got no safety
doubt has been planted im
growing the seed
if this tree of knowledge branches
to yo brain trace the roots back to
where i proceed
i flow knowing the need
of truth no interjections of
past pretenses shown to be weak
shall i breath (hah) (hah)
shall i breath on you
colds like the chi
but got no common sense
hot as a b-ham fever shall i sneeze on you
boil water in yo brain
wit the beats muscle
vice lock presupposed ideas
shall i put the squeeze on you
gave u two shots to rock me
what is three gone do
im done but to take a nap
hater ask politely
"please dont snooze.
it make it hard for me concentrate
on scenes from the news"
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Date Submitted: Apr 25, 2008 (01:10 AM)
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  XPERIENCE
08/21/08 (04:58 AM) 
that was nice.... LOL at hater ask politely ...lmao nice joint u got here.. aight i see u! much respect...

  The Hood Poet
05/05/08 (12:52 PM) 
man yo flow is death nigga, no deaf nigga, man u make hatin nigga say naw i got things to do. lol

  danceluv08
04/25/08 (01:33 AM) 
okay so i like ya style..n ya word play was on point..i like da imagery u gave me

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