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"Sexual Erosion"
  by Chocolate City
  - This Poem is a response to the poem {Your} Tongue & {Your} Dick by Arcane


Expires? Never!
Put the two snakes together..
My tongue and my dick..

Tongue creeps through your chest..
Licking off the cherry crest..
Sweet scent of your breast..

Dick stays in motion..
Rock my boat in your ocean..
And watch the waves part..

My chocolate stick..
Bust a nut of sensation..
Taste of vanilla..

My tongue work wonders..
A taste of your love below..
Sweet potato pie..

Mm Mm MM
Sighs
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Date Submitted: Oct 11, 2008 (05:27 PM)
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  Sexy First Lad...
12/18/08 (09:59 AM) 
GREAT WRITE... I LOVE IT!!!!

  NICKY BOO
11/04/08 (04:37 PM) 
"my tongue work wonders"...i like that...real sexy write!!! TEN stars....keep this up....AND im favin this....

  Riolicious
11/04/08 (01:35 AM) 
I like this man, great job. Love the beginning of this poem. Very nice

  Arcane
10/13/08 (09:03 AM) 
"Expires? Never! Put two snakes together.. My tongue and my dick"<<---Really it's like that huh? Lmao.. Very sexy..Love the response..

  BlessedOne
10/11/08 (10:20 PM) 
Very sensual haiku my southern brother! Having me lick my lips at the visions of this motion in the ocean. hmmmmm cherry crest, chocolate stick, vanilla, and sweet potato pie...oh my!!

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