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"Rushing Poetry"
  by The Aquanaut
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Flower Cosmic by The Aquanaut


I Be Blowin - De La Soul
I Am

More

than a Thrust

More

than a Buss

More

than the Words that you Moan and Cuss

I Be
the Inspiration
of Attraction

An Innovation
of the Waves
that come
with Satisfaction

I Am
the Tingle
that
you want
to
Increase

Until it becomes
the Beast
that you need to Release

I Am

More

than
A Redefinition

I Be
the Trust given
that'll lead to Submission

I Am the

Penetration of a Thought

I Be the Pleasure you'll never find
in
Things
store
bought

I Am
A
Rollercoastin

Soul
in
Motion

Love Potion

Spilling
in
the
Deepest
O
cean

...hmmm...

....Slowly....

Poetry Blushes

and tells me to hush...

Her face
Flushes

with thoughts of lust..

I already know
how she feels about us...

But I Won't Rush..

I won't rush..

i..
won't......

...yeah...

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Date Submitted: Jun 14, 2008 (03:28 AM)
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  LABEBAMORENA
11/30/08 (11:52 PM) 
the best poems are those that are made sweet passionate love to, not a two minute quicky joint !!!!!! tease n tantalize the words make sweet never ending forplay to them, poetry in the end, will thank you !!!!!!!!! hott piece...~LABEBAMORENA~

  foremanlin
10/16/08 (03:05 PM) 
I agree with you level, keep em cummin

  Jody
08/13/08 (10:11 PM) 
This is prob my fav. Love the flow and I"m loving this continuum you have going. Really digging this collection.

  PanthaG
06/14/08 (06:09 PM) 
yeh..poetry just has that rush....cool write..

  Disoriented Di...
06/14/08 (03:47 PM) 
i enjoy your explination...and i thoroughly understand im sorta at that moment as well with my poetry...

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