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"Revolution on the Rise(blood soldiers) chain poem"
  by itsnmysoul


its that time..
the time has come
for a revolution
i can see it in his eyes
assembles dream team ready to rise to any occasion
a cataclysmic crew..
the drawers along with the ones who drew you..

wages war against lost soul
that ole 144
with amo trapped in glory
trapping enemies
with our story..
of how we made it over

im with the king of all kings.. #1 commander a chief..
he takes precedence over me

and sens my out to battle armed fulled
i don't bare arms ..
i bear tongues
stories
and praises
verses and phrases
about how good he is to me..

revolution is on the rise..
can you see it in my eyes?
im in that Tru_loyalty
Calvary..
we riding to the death
each and every on
crucified
sacrificially
my blood is on the line for you and yours for me
i rides continually into the depths of the earth..
praying with a steadfast heart

whatever you need is you are apart of me
family
with one cross Jesus bare for we..
Jesus bared the cross alone
so all the world could go free
i carried my cross before
so i can carries your.. for you
and you for me

REVOLUNTIONARY family
branded by faith and realness
if you not believing...
you still covered in the blood
that Shepard's blood

i called out your name and he answered
accoridingly
revolution on the the rise,..

Tru_Loyalty.. soilders riding with me
and him
and them
the 144 elite
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Date Submitted: Sep 05, 2008 (05:57 AM)
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  Almond Eyes -(...
11/04/08 (01:37 AM) 
I enjoyed this because I personally pictured a battlefield. Your descriptive wording makes this poem relatable to all types of persons. Well done.

  GodChild
10/22/08 (09:38 AM) 
It conveys a message that "WE ARE AT WAR" and I like the way that you wrote the poem...... Nice write!

  WarmNillaSuga
09/11/08 (08:00 PM) 
This was a truly inspirational piece. And the church said...."AMEN" I loved it

  Preacher Dawso...
09/11/08 (05:18 PM) 
This was tight like the message.

  TeeBee
09/08/08 (08:44 PM) 
Glory....to the only wise God! This was powerful in so many ways. We are waging againest the enemy. Well done!

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