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"Replaceable"
  by African Queen


i was blinded by the affection,
the satifaction and beauty
kisses here and there that got sprung,
the shared exotic dances,
the deep and unforgettable passion
but miskates you made crumbled all this.
was she better than me?
i gave you a deeper feeling like no other,
a caress that always got you thinking,
a body that never turned you down
but you wanted the non-bootylious,
the freak of freaks and non the less the whoe of whoes.
but guess what?
there is a another you.
another better and fulfilling you.
you are replaceable.
hate is all i have for you now but in time it will all fade.
fade like a pathetic love life story.
you are and will remain a flushed waist of time in my life.
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Date Submitted: Jan 24, 2007 (04:58 AM)
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  Iaintgot1
11/20/08 (12:12 PM) 
Well dang! sounds like it was his loss. This is a very emotional write... I felt your pain all through it..but it's great thatyou got over it let him know what was up! 10 stars.

  LyricallyDamag...
11/15/08 (05:17 PM) 
Shiiiiit, let em know! mistakes made then a bigger mistake for getting caught.. smh but you always gatta let em know that they'd get replaced.. easily. shoo

  chocolaetreat
11/13/08 (11:04 AM) 
Ha ha ha ha ... fade like a pthetic love life story... you are and will remain a flushed waste of time in my life! Greatly Penned!

  Untouched_Soul
11/05/08 (07:48 PM) 
it is very hard to see past love sometimes and allow ourself to let go of someone this expressed that with clarity

  fiya_yada
10/14/08 (04:44 AM) 
this was real, we all asked ourselve what she had over me, and the answer is not a dam thang , men just do senseless shit sometimes....sorry you had to experience dat pain ma

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