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"Remorseless"
  by ...Da RiDdLeR F0rT...
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Redemption by One


Sunshine refracted
Beneath scorched depraved wide wings
Murky Nights Always

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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (05:48 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 08/20/08 (06:13 PM)
Author: One
Poem Title: Sickened

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  TRU-IN-DEED
08/20/08 (11:34 PM) 
ohhhh man you pretty much went there with this one. Nice depiction. The backdrop is friggin off the wall too. - T.I.D.

  Blakfiya
08/20/08 (08:50 PM) 
damn....this is like..."let there be lig-.....Nooooooooooooooo". So dark and the music just so threatening. Nice.

  --->ROXIE<---
08/20/08 (07:04 PM) 
NICE

  One
08/20/08 (05:57 PM) 
tha pic is sick too...shit...I love this shit!!!!...definitely captured depravity well

  Disoriented Di...
08/20/08 (05:55 PM) 
LOL...that demon in the bg looks funny!...*gets serious* This was messed up why you got refract the sun for...tsk...had hope for the poor guy

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