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"ready set GO!!!"
  by cotton candy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Thats what u get by BlakkStarr


im not sure yuu were feeling luhv
i mean sure they may have put yuu above
but i dont think it shuda been called luhv

yuu cant say luhv unless yuu mean it
and when yuu do it only givesz tha other person permission ta give yuu shit
maybe even get hit

itsz fukked up when hesz gone and he took everything
and all he left wasz a sad song ta sing
and with yer pride and yer dignity he took bakk isz hisz ring

i wasnt lookin ta get hurt but ta be luhved
everything gone as if yuu were mugged

itsz gonna last for awhile but i kno yuu can get thru it
even if it takesz time juss move bit by bit

need a hand im here for yuu
so dont look down and dont feel blue
itsz not how yuu luhv but who???

and maybe thatsz wuht yuu get when yuu let yer heart win
but yuu cant say it won bcusz there aint a heart
itsz juss yer head that she left in a spin
but dont give up try again get up and restart

yuu'll find yer luhv soone enough
but it aint gunna be easy itsz gunna be real tough

take it slow
ready set GO!!!

PS
i kno shesz out there yuu juss aint lookin hard enough
look a bit harder and she'll come around

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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (08:16 AM)
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