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"Rappers"
  by baby wiggles


Rappers now and days
Dont understand
They rap about there past
And about how bad it was
But right after that they go home
To there nice mansions
Are big homes
And they go back to there rich lives
But think we are still living in bad conditions
We are still living in the ghetto
We are living in it
And most of us cant get out of it
We are the ones who worry bout money
We are the ones who worry bout payin bills
We are the ones that live off of
Mc Donalds,Top Roman,and peanut butter sandwhiches with no jam
And they are over there complaing bout how bad there lives where
But now there rich and out the ghetto
I dont get that May be you do
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Date Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 (12:25 AM)
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  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/22/08 (01:03 AM) 
you speak on a very good point queen...but i think it's truly hard 4 us all....true most "rapper's" tend 2 brag and boast and talk dis and that....but either way that's is the art of it...hip hop/rap/poetry...we speak on what we live...how we see it...or flip it how we flip it..right?..but it's about the message's..the meaning...and the after effect's...and u did a good job on all 3 here...some error's as most have...mine included...don't kno how many piece's i got..that people prolly like....WT...
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08/22/08 (12:51 AM) 
i find this to be ok i really don't get into the whole rap thing like that so i gave it nine Poetic..

  Quite
08/22/08 (12:41 AM) 
so real so true loving this boo

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