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"Pressure Cooker"
  by Chocolatezeus




Boiling
Steaming
The heat exuding so much
That it melts the very air we breathe

I found my dynasty
King and Queen
Happily ever after is reality

Then the fiery arrows
Bombard everything
The battering ram is all we hear
Moment to moment
Obstacles appear

All for the sake of destroying us
Taking away what we found
The treasure chest that we found
They want destroyed
Right now

Friends
Family
Strangers
They come unrestrained for us

We are the center of their
Hated assaults

The heat rises
Not from our loins or souls
Our minds want to implode
Explode

Release a mother lode of pent up
Frustrated in trepidation
As we are interrogated about our position

Merely attacked to witness our strength
Visionary of future entanglement
Apothecaries to your
Destined living
Intentions

Char broiled
Broiled past the
Perceived point

Pure
Living manifestations
Of ultimate classifications
Specialty evidence

Cooked to
Perfection
We are the meal

Perfect dining event
Together all courses
Every daily requirement
Permanently met



From the chocolatezeus collection 8/5/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Aug 05, 2008 (04:09 PM)
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  LyricallyDelic...
08/12/08 (03:14 PM) 
The third stanza says everything to me.. Aint it a shame how a haters reality can fuck up a perfectly magestic kingdom?

  Bella Poetik
08/06/08 (06:05 AM) 
goodness, i can SO relate to this!!! "I found my dynasty/King and Queen...Obstacles appear/All for the sake of destroying us...Friends/Family/Strangers/We are the center of their/Hated assaults" i know of this too well my friend...this was so riveting! i'm finding myself completely immersed in your poetry dear poet! :-)

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