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"Poetry Bluez..."
  by PanthaG


don;t got no

poetry in my pocket

words take form

capsized

speed rocket

jump the gun

full loaded jacket

subtle down

the bass

needle mark

scratch it

crackle the vinyl

while the sidewalk

tells a story

concrete greys

my ink blotz

off homicide corpse

stray thoughts

left to rot

no room

for a grave

shell it out

hollow

dug deeper in

engraved

the last mark

on the headstone

here lies

RAGE

r.i.p

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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (09:57 PM)
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  The Mad Poet
11/26/08 (02:49 PM) 
I agree with Syndel rage is a bitch to hold on to....Very emotional write...You always put your heart & soul in your writes.....Take care & keep flowing sweetie...But most of all don't sweat the small stuff...Much love & respect always

  Syndel
11/26/08 (07:48 AM) 
damn girl I am glad you got that all out rage is a bitch to hold on too

  alastor
11/20/08 (10:11 PM) 
very emotionally charged as always ma. I'm going to start calling you potent around the poetry circles of the world. the remarks you make are always short seering jabs of poetry penetrating deeply; beautifully bruising my organs. i love your style ma; keep up the good work!!!!

  butterscotch
11/20/08 (12:55 AM) 
Wow you have given birth to a great poem but killed poetry at the same time.. You the one of the poetry giants on the site and the world as a whole Ilove this poem as I do all of your writes.... Your Biggest Fan, Chris

  iva
11/19/08 (10:19 PM) 
great write g

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