# |
COMMENTER |
POEM |
COMMENT DATE |
COMMENT |
| 1 |
.Candice.Renee. |
Crime Scene:Criminal Intent |
08/21/08 (05:10 AM) |
hhmmmm.... som people kill poetry in a way.. but others continue to bring her right back to life. nah its not me son! i don't need you getting all Sun Wei on my ass about this one! lol. this was graphically awesome. |
| 2 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Balance |
08/21/08 (05:10 AM) |
BRA.. YA KNOW IM FEELING HOW YOU FLOW.. AND DIS IS JUS FIYAH... DAT BACKGROUND IS DOPE... CONTRASTING THE LIGHT AND DARK..MASSIVE UPS DK |
| 3 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
*~ Reality Vs Imagination ~* |
08/21/08 (05:08 AM) |
INCREIDBLE DEPTH BRA.. AND LA PRINCESA YOUR FLOW IS TIGHT. WORKING WELL TOGETHER. NAND DAT AUDIO .. JUS HIT YOU UP.. DK |
| 4 |
DonPoetiq |
Hiding |
08/21/08 (05:08 AM) |
Mamita...Your poems are so poignant...One thing though/In my heart, I know that you want to say more. Let everything out until the spirit of the Lord completes your pieces...There's soooo much more for to give. Anyway though, thank you for what you gave us. I'll always support your efforts/no matter how short they are. Don Poetiq/Poetiqmaster Be Blessed...Peace |
| 5 |
.Candice.Renee. |
I Got Lost This Morning |
08/21/08 (05:06 AM) |
wow..... you went a little deep here buddy...hhmmm.... maybe you should stay lost and find a new path or get back on the road that you know. either way... its going to lead you somewhere that you should feel right at hoe with.... meanwhile... WHAT IN THE GEIGHNESS IS THIS ISH MAN! you ole.. .flashback into the 80's ass nig! ctfu...pfffness. |
| 6 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
StarCraft |
08/21/08 (05:06 AM) |
LMAO AT DIS, FEELIN YA & IT MADE MY BOI LAUGH .. HES THE GAMER IN OUR FAM... MASSIVE LOVE THO DK |
| 7 |
Syndel |
REVELATION |
08/21/08 (05:05 AM) |
Amen this joy that I have the world didnt give it so the World cant take it away its a beautiful thing when we realize where we have been and where we are going and who will walk the journey with us very strong write |
| 8 |
~Unpredictable Nature~ |
beautiful hue-man ( portrait of love ) |
08/21/08 (05:04 AM) |
oh ib...SORRY I CAME SO LATE..THIS BACKGORUND TOOKME TO ANOTHER PLACE..I'M AT WORK SURFIING THRU GS TO SEE WHAT'S HOT AND I WAS GOING THRU YOU WORKS AND I SEEN THIS AND ANOTHER ONE...THIS PIECE IS JUST BEAUTIFUL...JUST BEAUTIFUL MOMMA...THIS BACKGROUND TOOK ME BACK TO MY LISA FRANK LUNCH KIT DAYS........ |
| 9 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Ideal??? |
08/21/08 (05:04 AM) |
LMAO DOX, YA HIT DA TRUTH, HENCE THE REASON I TURNED TO MY METAHPYSICAL DARKNESS DROPS... DANG DIS HIT ME UP.. AS EVER DOPE |
| 10 |
.Candice.Renee. |
Perception |
08/21/08 (05:04 AM) |
hmmmm I've learn this slowly.. that everyones reality seems to be different in many ways.... i like this... its something alot of people should feel. |
| 11 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
How's this for truth? |
08/21/08 (05:02 AM) |
LMAO, DOX.... TOYING WIT DEM WORDS PUTTING DEM OUT AS EVER WIT FIYAH.... DK |
| 12 |
caramel_skin |
Crime Scene:Criminal Intent |
08/21/08 (05:01 AM) |
this feels like a perfect intro to one of the csi or law and order episodes- would love to know how this story unfolds |
| 13 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Essence vs. Energy |
08/21/08 (05:01 AM) |
MMMMM CAT IM FEELIN YA, WAT CAN I SAY!!! DANG GURL HANG ON IN... DARE IS LIGHT CUMMIN THRU.. & THAT COMMING FROM ME KING OF DARKNESS LMAO.. MUCH LOVE DK |
| 14 |
.Candice.Renee. |
Acceptance |
08/21/08 (05:01 AM) |
hhmmmm...indeed a lost but a gain of a lesson being learned still getting taught to the "teacher". and...sorry to say.... but.... you JACKED ME! that felt kinda good to say... I hate how in these cases when you write like this... its kinda like you writing down thoughts I've already had... blah... lemme leave.. too... depressing! |
| 15 |
XPERIENCE |
Shall I Breath On You [ Games Juxaposition] |
08/21/08 (04:58 AM) |
that was nice.... LOL at hater ask politely ...lmao nice joint u got here.. aight i see u! much respect... |
| 16 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Besmirched |
08/21/08 (04:57 AM) |
LMAO AT THAT LAST LINE -- BAND BRAIN BOILING-- SICK FORT...INCREDIBLE ONCE AGAIN.. DFO A FAVE AND DBACKGROUND.. MMM AM FEELING DIS ONE.. DK |
| 17 |
E~LoVe |
Listen |
08/21/08 (04:57 AM) |
you're ..fresh ;).........this poem is sad...but nevertheless...written nice. |
| 18 |
XPERIENCE |
What The Seed Objectifies |
08/21/08 (04:56 AM) |
first off i love this song!!! the wordplay in this joint made it that much more enjoyable.. lyrically awesome... i love how this joint ended.. "It bears no blame for when it was
a seed the same terrain restricted its
movement
shall we cast a discerning eye upon it
for simply gripping what its pedestal objectifies" NICE! |
| 19 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Annihilation |
08/21/08 (04:56 AM) |
10 & FAV FOR SURE!!! BACKGROUD JUS DOPE...DK |
| 20 |
XPERIENCE |
Lyrical Divas |
08/21/08 (04:54 AM) |
nice lil flow on this one. liked the end.. nice joint you got going on here.. much respect |
| 21 |
Quite |
REVELATION |
08/21/08 (04:53 AM) |
this was a great write mama ur talented baby |
| 22 |
caramel_skin |
He's loving me |
08/21/08 (04:53 AM) |
your flow was on point I loved the way you ended this piece |
| 23 |
DaRk KnIgHt |
Obedience To God |
08/21/08 (04:53 AM) |
CAT, IM WIT SYNDEL... YOU KNOW I CAN RELATE TO THIS DROP MAYBE BECAUSE IN THE PAST IVE BEEN DARE..OPEN HONEST PIECE... AS EVERY CAT, HANG ON IN THERE... DK |
| 24 |
XPERIENCE |
Love Affair |
08/21/08 (04:52 AM) |
yes music can def take u thru a bunch of different moods.. this was a lil mellow joint.. loved the vibe of this joint... nice flow |
| 25 |
E~LoVe |
UnBroken |
08/21/08 (04:52 AM) |
"eyes stained with pain"....i dig this. |
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