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"Pity or Tity…You decide…"
  by Ye Cre


It’s like a game to me when I come
On the scene you got drama going on
So you call me up to talk it over but
All I want is to put this tity in your mouth…

That drama you chose to live with
Nothing personal just tired of hearing it
Do you need this pity from me to believe you
While you sit there talking and pouting

Yeah let Ma fix the broken man wounds
Come on lay down while you talk it thru
Gone take a suck or two there, there I got you
The more you talk the more I apply tity for you

Oh now it’s another day and still in dismay
But you pick up the phone so instead of tity
I got pity for you there; there it’ll be okay boo
Talk it out let the pain flow out I got you

Another night has crept up and you are
Down in the dumps so I meet with you
Here you go I’m unbuttoning my blouse
There, there here’s what you need tity for you

But to my surprise your dismay has an appetite
Now you want to release the frustration up off you
There, there now with pity to your face I go
Climbing up to the field, batter up, I’m open

You dived right in darting your tongue around
Again, an again now time to head to another base
On my way down I put this tity in your face are
you going to be able to handle anymore, I got you

With practice and skill I began to wind it up
Having little pity for you I struck you out
My turn to squirm and sit on pitcher’s mound
There, there use long stroke’s Ma got you now

Forgetting about your problems and worries
Damn the mail the bills and the children
If only for a little while I can make you smile
So which will it be tity or pity from me…

Thanks, you just witnessed a YE CreATION!
What do you know about that David Ruffin?...Feel me then...

Yeah
Can We MAke Love One more Time/ David Ruffin
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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (03:03 PM)
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  jamal
10/03/08 (06:38 AM) 
when a man has a problem throw a tity in his face and it will all seem so trivial afterwards hahaha... like this ma... a man could never really be stressed with you

  soultrytongue
09/04/08 (02:39 PM) 
girl you crazy,but i feel you....i dig this...10 starz!!!!!

  KNYNE
09/02/08 (03:29 PM) 
Interesting write...I take tity for $500 pleeaazzzeee!!! I'm sure this would put an end to most wars!!! LOL

  JustChuck
08/18/08 (03:43 AM) 
Most men desire to have such a generous vixen and love to take the woes of life away even if for a moment. I have a strong feeling that most fellas would go for tity over pity at an extremely high rate.

  touchdapearl2
08/15/08 (07:56 PM) 
uhm well im with ordained misfit which do you perfer ? this was a interresting write!

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