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"Pineapple Rings: Chocolatezeus Smoothie"
  by Chocolatezeus


The Effect
Devastating

One of the most
Erotic
Romantic things
Enjoyed by me

Walking down the
Grocery aisle
In the can good section
I shiver in memory

The cold sensation
As you place it on
Your creation

Thoughts of sweet tastes
Creamy creation
Mixed with licked sticky

Engulf me
You love to hear me
Moan your name

Caught up in you
Erotic rapture
You have driven me
Happily insane

Nibbling
Lips brushing
Against veins
Throbbing

Biting off each layer
Savoring the delight
As I feel you suck more
More on your chocolate stick

Mmmm
Yes you know my spot
You lick and graze it
Steel is softer than this

More pineapple taken
Nibbled and eaten
As I am devoured
Within my skin

I am open
The last ring remains
Yellow glistening sweetness

Tongue tricks
Flick of tongue and lips
As pineapple ring twists
Turning into a bigger toy outlet

Up and down
Swirling
Around and around
You lick

Grabbing a hold of
The last pineapple ring
Juices spilling

Me mixing with
Pineapple juice
Making a Zeus smoothie

Delicious protein
You ingest it all
I can do nothing
But stare at you
Enthralled



From the chocolatezeus collection 6/3/08 ©
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Date Submitted: Jun 03, 2008 (01:24 PM)
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Date: 07/01/08 (03:03 PM)
Author: OjosDeAngel
Poem Title: Mango Slices

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comment icon  COMMENTS (21)
  Ezdozit
08/04/08 (11:58 AM) 
Wow I thought i was creative you take the cake with this one i think i need to stop by the grocery store

  TeachersPet
07/26/08 (04:37 PM) 
Damn...I love(s) me some chocolate. Pineapples and chocolate, now I never tried that, but I am adding it to my grocery list!

  Juicy1on1
07/26/08 (01:01 PM) 
Who knew pineapples could generate so much heat. Very erotic. Enjoyed every drop.

  blessed92297
07/22/08 (09:49 PM) 
This is a unique smoothie! Very sensual and hot. Too visual for me. The pineapple juices running...hummm

  Sinsual
07/21/08 (11:22 PM) 
You learn something new everyday this is so hot I had to re-shower lol just kidding a great visual for sure. Hot mos def

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