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"PERFECTO!!!"
  by DOMINICANPOET


From This Moment On - Brian White/Shania Twain

IM SURE YOU KNO WHO THIS TOO IF NOT B3YOND R3D3MPTION
HE SAID I NEED TO CHANGE MY RHYME SCHEME SO CHECK
PLEASE BE HONEST****

Selfishness no longer resides here
for you i changed my whole frame of mind
the fact that i only want you near
got me going crazy all the time

Love is a word i have used times before
yes i have no reason to lie
but everytime i've had my heart tore
and in and out of relationships i managed to get by

just enough to give you my heart
the hardest thing i had to do
but i was ready for a new start
and the one i wanted to start with was you

all my trust i have i gave straight in your hand
please dont neva break that bond
cause im trying as hard as i can
to make this work cause of you i am fond

perfecto i swear i think you are sometimes
cause at night i sit up and read all your work
over and over, line by line
tryin to find one flaw yet it doesn't work

so i remain to believe your the perfect guy
the one of who i dreamt of at night
the one who i would search for and never find
the one i now found who guides me to the light

you say your love consists of five stages
so im here to get to the highest one
ready to do anything and make any changes
as long as once we finish all the rounds the word you recite is love!!!

im willing to wait forever and a day
to here such a beautiful pharse
as this pharse you should say
so come take me out this maze

stop making me stumble or simple rubish
cause im feelin you and im ready to settle down
your the perfecto man my body misses
so im ready for you to change that frown!!!
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Date Submitted: May 29, 2008 (01:05 AM)
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  bookum
05/31/08 (11:34 PM) 
wow! powerful write and emotional. The whole flow of this piece was on point. u did your thing. For sure 10

  Mr. RTJ
05/31/08 (02:31 PM) 
another good emotional drop. admire the change in structure from typical. gave it a fresher feel but remained true to you. good drop.

  P.S. i luhv ye...
05/30/08 (01:36 AM) 
wow i really felt tha emotion in thysz i lykef it so much a ten and mos def a fav... keep thagud onesz comming

  nothin but the...
05/30/08 (01:06 AM) 
i like this it was a great write you really know how to express your feelings.

  *~§Poetic§~*
05/29/08 (11:56 PM) 
you captured me in this write mama REAL TALK i admire what you and BR share this riite here shows that wat you two have is true not just a show to entertain the GS ppl.....loved it Poetic...

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