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"Parce qu'apres vous...."
  by imperfect beauTy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Reticent Rendezvous by DorianGrey



embark upon your voyage
.
.is my
.
presence
.
felt?.
.
dig
d
e
e
p
beneath worlds core

dive
b
e
l
o
w
.
.earths belt.
.
feel frigid and frost bit soul
swelter,

as it melts

travel amongst tremors trenches,
spewing vile heat

as knees, against damnation's coals,
kiss as they greet

reminiscent of sun bathings,
the glorious rays excretions


`` yes Love..
..you are the one ``

against your frame, ashes crash,
you cringe,
abhorring the agony,

even within
every singe,
far more fervent, is your passion for me

soot devours your composite,
taunting you to welcome the intrusion of submission

`` Amor..
...just listen ``

as the blazoned breeze

of tortured tumult, makes ''weak'' of your knees

feel the ache

of eternity's earthquake

bones, brittle

longing, riddles

(- embodies your every limb -)

oui, mon cherie,
tu est lui

(- yes, my Love...you are -him -)



`====================================`




the "one' is you, so pray tell, can we meet??
parce qu'apres vous

( because, after you ), my final lover


there will be

...no other


`====================================`



so decayingly sweet

will be, of the day, we meet

and the day will come when bitterness

shall pump, primitively, from aged, chafed lips

but unbridled love, will still cause you to kiss,

\-- lustfully --/

implode,

from forbidden load,

man made whole,

\-- just for me --/

====

redemptions eruption

your manhood, thrust in

forlorn ed feast, lies

betwixt thighs

are
.
you
.
yet
.
hypnotized?

look me in my eyes

see my soul, as it cries

i'm willing to sacrifice


mine
own
...salvation...

allow winds to capture,
cautions rapture
if here, is where you make your final resting spot
atop
and upon voluptuous breast
temptress
where your coveted mental shall label,
just near navel
..evermore's manifestation..

allow hands to roam the palate of wondrous womb,
wherest enough of soon
i, unselfishly

will house
safely
and bring to term your immortality

`====================================`


where are you now....?
whisper the address, love of this magnitude must be kept discreet



can we....
.
.
.
...meet...?

`====================================`


tongues tip,
permit

..to trace


eternity's areolas,
dipped in "always"
silky textured circumference

.."forever" laced


of, sealed fate

circle the landscapes

feel, the buds, of taste

send shivers, up your spine

yes King, you will be mine

just long enough, for a lifetime

succinct splendor

sweet surrender

love begins and ends with you



there shall be no other
.
.....
...
.
`====================================`


apres vous
(( after you ))

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Date Submitted: Aug 11, 2008 (10:47 PM)
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  BIG CHIEF
09/09/08 (12:09 PM) 
this was creative and sexy at the same time..and i wish that i can read all dat sexy french thing you had going on..((damn i wish i was bilingual)) great write

  JuztBe
09/09/08 (11:29 AM) 
"allow hands to roam the palate of wondrous womb, wherest enough of soon i, unselfishly will house safely and bring to term your immortality " wow ma u laid this one down i gotta agree with Pro this is one of ur best i have ever read which simply means u stepped ur game up and now ur on a whole nother level of perfection excellent scribe ma just wow

  ~Unpredictable...
09/09/08 (08:43 AM) 
do't truly understand spanish ut the title kept calliing me and the scribe...LAWD HAMMERCY..I was loving every word...hate to see you go but I know how it is...I'll keep in touch...and dip off to the east real soon.

  Blakfiya
08/14/08 (10:27 PM) 
Ah, love that last line and also, "against your frame, ashes crash, you cringe, abhorring the agony, even within every singe, far more fervent, is your passion for me"....just adore that part. This was divine. Blending languages as you crafted this masterpiece. One of my favorites too.

  ♀. Pro L...
08/13/08 (07:21 AM) 
you already know the title drew my ass in... this was probably one of your best to date... fucking loved and faved

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