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"Over Rated"
  by Jayla


Sex is someting i have often thought about
But in the back of my mind there was always doubt
Maybe its a step I'm too scared to take
Because I could make a big mistake
My man said it would be something I won't forget
but instead it was something I came to regret
He got me alone and our clothes hit the floor
we were hugging and kissing and I wanted more
so now my backs on his bed while he's holding my legs
And I'm damn near about to beg for him to go a ahead
But now that's he's in
I feel a sensation
He felt it too
and before I knew he was through
two strokes and a grind was all I got
and that stupid bastard got me all hot
I fell for the hype
that some dudes can go all night
and know how to act when the p**** is tight
But I played the fool
Next time I'll get mine before he do
I got to admit I really didn't hate it
But now I know sex is over rated




This poem goes out to my ex-boyfriend
Deuce!!!!
He was wack then and he's wack now!!!
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Date Submitted: Apr 16, 2007 (04:49 AM)
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  MizzBrandon
05/20/07 (05:31 PM) 
He was wack...but he couldn't have been that wack if...lol..but it is humerous.

  c jones
04/22/07 (05:55 AM) 
hahahaha....... i bet u was mad as hell dude couldnt even go 30 seconds for u.

  angeleyes1
04/19/07 (02:34 PM) 
dammm I feel you on this one I had one guy who was a minute man and dam I still loved him not the sex just loved him but great write and message nice flow

  rsenio
04/18/07 (11:49 PM) 
All i can say is HA!!!!!!

  say_baby_08
04/18/07 (06:45 PM) 
oooooooh Imma tell deuce!!!!!! he gonna be mad that you made em out to be a minute man!!! lol, his pride gonna be hurt! the truth hurts and in this case it's hella funny 2!

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