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"One wish"
  by One


Knowing
that you're dying
with only your soul
somehow surviving
can be beautiful
certainly because
ain't shit unnerving
me deservedly
taking a little bit more
time to think about loving
leaving a little less time
pushing, shoving, selfishly
now becoming selfless
leaving a little bit less
life left with lifelesness
needlessly needling me
inbetween blinks succeeding
shrinking somehow heated
thoughts all wound up wanting
wondering what's been lost
wondering who's the boss
as well as what's the cost
living semi assisted lives
living on life support
starting fights for sport
appealing crimes in courts
of perverted public opinions
watching while we contort
cavorting in front of their minions
while mere minors make decisions
definitely diminiutive in stature
while somehow we're happy
existing under their dominion
ruled by mere mental midgets
I'll watch as mortals fidget
hoping to be immortal
being at one with
words I wish
to live


Tie My Hands (Instrumental) - Lil Wayne/Robin Thicke

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Date Submitted: Aug 04, 2008 (12:00 AM)
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  Renda
08/07/08 (02:13 AM) 
i liked dis cuzz itfelt like u were just gettin some sh*t off yo chest. it flowed great which made it easy and enteraining to read

  Esoteric
08/05/08 (08:53 PM) 
As I read this one it seems to me as you're fed up with bs and just serching for that calm place thats distant from all the chaos.

  Afroditee
08/05/08 (04:16 PM) 
This was just...fun to read. The rhythm, the structure, the layout (which reminds me of the curves of a woman!)...this was just powerful! Would love to know where u are when you wrote this: mentally, that is.

  LadyMay16
08/05/08 (11:31 AM) 
Wow these words and that background...SICK...it be like life blowing in the wind praying to never- land

  Jody
08/05/08 (12:34 AM) 
this put me in a sad mood. seriously, I feel this in the gut, owww. Even staring at the bg, to wish or not to wish. Melancholy feel.

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