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"One nite stand gone wrong"
  by touchdapearl2
  - This Poem is a response to the poem JUST ONE NIGHT II by A.C.H.


Yeah wasnt that your favorite song.....
If only for one night
Yeah and that i wish i would've thought twice
So, i see you know im with child....
But guess what fool i have been pregnant for awhile
Yeah for 2 months now....
Tho that might sound tiff
But like you stated if only for one night
I was at the club wishing for a lame like you
But hell my wish never came true
Instead I ended being stalked by you
They say two wrongs dont make a right
But now i guess thats something i would have to deal with for the rest of my life
I've pleaded and begged you to stop coming thru
Look i dont care about you
You have gone and got it all twisted
I know you and your mama feel like its the right thing to do
BUt this is not YOU!
So all i ask of you
Is please stop coming thru
I've have heard your lies in the streets about me having weak knee's
Go head save face if this make's you complete
But you,I, and the police know your drama wont cease
So now I gotta get my lil brother beast
I didnt want it to come to this
But i see you cant resist getting your ass kicked
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (05:24 PM)
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  Snugasaglove (...
12/16/08 (11:41 PM) 
Awww, hell! You put his MAMA in it too?!---DAYUUM!---This whole series has had me cracking up, shaking my head, and saying prayers for yalls souls! LOL! Cuz BOFA yall is WRONG FOR THIS!

  Shar
11/17/08 (03:19 PM) 
lol do what you gotta do... thats what good pussy can do to a nigga! nice write

  Lil'kendra
10/07/08 (11:53 AM) 
great write nicely wriitten, thats how people get tho but i loved it keep up the good work

  REALKISSES
08/18/08 (06:35 PM) 
GREAT RESPONNSE MA

  ash_g
08/18/08 (06:25 PM) 
=) lol i like dis one good job

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