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"one night stand"
  by Mbé


i don't understand
half the time,
i'm completely oblivious to your existence

other half?
spent musing on questions i should have asked:
did i leave an imprint?
a sign, a mark
something to say i was here?
do i stand out? stick out in your mind, struck by me?
was there something lasting that i did?
something about the way my eyes looked sleepy in the morning
or the way you could still feel my lips when i was gone
was i unforgettable, that one surreal night we spent together?

and when i see you
all i can remember is that kiss
and how we didn't say a word
i don't understand
i din't think it would end as a one night stand
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Date Submitted: Nov 18, 2008 (11:13 AM)
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  African Queen
12/03/08 (07:20 AM) 
my gal, i didn't know you had it....this was such an emotional piece ma....loving it!!

  Jody
11/23/08 (05:23 PM) 
wow, this was nice... the thoughts behind a one night stand... very creative take, well done.

  trp
11/20/08 (04:22 PM) 
did i leave an imprint that's what i'm talking about will he remember how it felt when we were together real talk about man and how they express there self

  revolt
11/20/08 (04:19 PM) 
nice write ma

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
11/19/08 (08:40 PM) 
Nicely done queen. Great concept. Masterly done to perfection. Definitely feeling emotions pouring..............

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