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"On Your Knees"
  by ASW
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Domina 101 (Aiming to Please) by Isis sun




In the beginning when I revealed what I was into
You were shy and sheepish
When I first broached the subject
You seemed hesitant and more than a little squeamish
As time passed and the trust built on both our parts
We got into it with all our hearts
I took you right there to the edge
Hanging by your fingertips perched on the ledge

Losing your clothes as you lose your inhibitions
Check your ego at the door
You look so lovely on your knees
Poised on the floor

On your knees waiting patiently
All day long you have been picturing all the ways
You intend to surrender to me
Your body, will, desire, mind and soul

On your knees
I will give you what you want
I will give you what you need
I will make you bleed
On your knees
As I make you submit
Yes baby I know you like this freaky shit
On your knees
As I make you writhe and yield
As I enjoy the power I shamelessly wield

On your knees
As I make you beg for it
You know how much I love that shit
On your knees
As I lower my dripping pussy to your upturned face
Order you to lick and suck my clit
Cum on wrap your tongue around it
On your knees
As I wind my hips around
Grind your face into my mound
On your knees
You do a Mistress proud
As we both come and you cry out loud

On your knees
Wearing my cum
Nipple clips, your sweat and a collar
On your knees
Cause you aim to please
On your knees
Cause I love to tease and do as I please

On your knees
On your knees waiting for my commands
You gladly obey
My voice fries your brain
Causing the best kind of pain
My words makes your dick erect
My pelvic thrusts make your body sweat

On your knees
Brand you as my consort
Deliver painful pleasure of the best sort
Make it hurt so good
Like you knew I could
Like you hoped I would

The magnetic attraction reeled you in
Your need to submit sealed you in
You haven’t been right since
The day I took over your existence
As Your Mistress


~ASW~

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Date Submitted: Aug 08, 2008 (12:12 AM)
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  l0nnieugene
12/07/08 (08:24 PM) 
ASW, You got me on my knees, in a pleading, praying position, supplicating 4some1 who will write & read a poem such as this 4me. Like You, i have from time2time found inspiration & gone thru conniptions read that Egyptian Queen, Isis. Being old skool i put on the Temptations "Aint 2Proud2 Beg' the 2nd time i read this piece piece.

  Chocolatezeus
09/17/08 (11:46 PM) 
Enter ASW the Dominatrix. She will make you heart, make you beg, make you pray to her the master. Great erotic commanding work. loved it

  KNYNE
08/09/08 (01:32 PM) 
dayumm...it most definitely got hot in here as i was reading this. sistah, i love your flow and your meticiously choice of wordz. you basicallly left me speechless as i was able to be a peekin' tom in your window experiencing this sexual escapade. 10 starz

  Juicy1on1
08/08/08 (03:26 PM) 
This was hot and a great response.

  jdbrown
08/08/08 (08:43 AM) 
i definitely felt this one, hot write

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