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"On A Summer Day"
  by Arcane "The Lioness"


ThugLuv Challenge
A picture is worth a 1,000 words (13 lines, no more, no less)


We sat through the summer wind
Watching the sun drift throughout the ocean waves
While we caressed the breeze between our feet
I could feel the aroma of the sea wrap slowly underneath my lungs
Losing me carefully in the mysterious wonder
As if it whisked me away to the softness of your heart
Howling proudly with every word you spoke
You revived me
When I found myself lost…Depicting my illusion
Give me a sense of hope….Dripped and laced with rays of lust
Dawning gently with a tender kiss
As if you cast my shadows away to the laughter of your tender skin
And filling my summer with glowing dreams

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Date Submitted: Nov 10, 2008 (03:50 PM)
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  LAB **Ms. Cool...
12/30/08 (12:32 PM) 
As if it whisked me away to the softness of your heart Howling proudly with every word you spoke You revived me for some reason those lines right there seemed powerfull. if someone has that kind of magic, I would truly be blessed with a special kind of relationship.

  DaddysGirl
12/03/08 (11:08 AM) 
A beautiful moment. I loved this! Your words truly told a story for this image. Wonderful scribe to complete the challenge.

  AR-15
11/13/08 (03:16 PM) 
Some deep and vivid imagery.. that was laced out perfectly. the background had a strong effect as well. Very passionate feeling piece here.. Beautifully written

  Ms. Sincerious
11/11/08 (12:25 PM) 
ahh you did this in such a fashion that only you could.. yor imagery is always vivid as hell and this was no exception.. how lovely.

  B. Rose
11/10/08 (09:42 PM) 
Thats was bautifully written yo...for reals..

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