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"Oh Mister..."
  by Ye Cre


One day enjoying my view, along came these handsome men passing through…

Oh, Mister, can I go with you…

Mister rap star in the green Jaguar
Mister good hair in the orange drop top
Mister fine ass in the blue tight whip
Mister hazel eyes in the black side kick
Mister Latin man on the yellow Yamaha

Oh Mister, can I be your confidant…

Mister fireman in the red fire truck
Mister police officer in the unmarked patrol car
Mister truck driver in your big silver rig
Mister ambulance man here, check my pulse please
Mister post man I got a package for your mail truck

Oh Mister, can I be your ghetto superstar…

Mister hustle man in the Cadillac on 24's
Mister real man in the Chevrolet trimmed in gold
Mister act right in the pimped out Honda Civic
Mister cuddle bear hidden on the city transit bus
Mister fucc me right riding a damn mountain bike

One day enjoying my view, along came these handsome men passing through…Oh Mister…

Thanks, you just witnessed a YE CreATION!

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Date Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 (08:31 PM)
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  tripptucka
11/16/08 (08:30 AM) 
sweet write. 10

  JustChuck
08/18/08 (03:38 AM) 
Different people come into our lives through different avenues be it plane, train or public transit. Thanks for sharing this witty little gem.

  Syndel
08/17/08 (07:32 PM) 
very nice vibe this write has a great deal of flavor as well I will def come back

  touchdapearl2
08/16/08 (02:26 AM) 
lol oh lord that was a trip but i know a few jones that ask dudes them questions all the time and for it be put into a humor poem was brillant,lol

  DOMINICANPOET
08/16/08 (12:36 AM) 
hmmm thought provoking ten from me keep em coming---------DP

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