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"Numb"
  by LadyMay16


Feel like veins being shot by neutral drug
Slowly causing insides to be numb
Making all troubles slowly fade
And smiles to turn upside down
Face forms permanent frowns
And love... lost vision
Seem like nothing
Matters when
You feel
Numb

Life
Seems hard
When you hurt
Like kissing scars
Knowing they still burn
Yet wishing it could stop
From reminding you that life
Is more than just feelings and sins
Experiences causes lessons
In return lessons thaw out the numbness



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Date Submitted: Nov 19, 2008 (02:54 PM)
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  Manisha
11/20/08 (09:16 PM) 
Very nicely said. Love the layout and the emotion(s) expressed!

  Sum-Thyng Like...
11/19/08 (05:50 PM) 
being numb is a very sad feeling ... i love how u expressed this in this write

  The Mad Poet
11/19/08 (05:02 PM) 
Perfect example of being "Numb"...You really express the concept so eloquently in this write...That pen of yours is not to be taken lightly that's for sure...Much love & respect

  Moz' Wizdom
11/19/08 (03:18 PM) 
Very nice write. "Lessons thaw out the numbness" is very true and liberating...

  .Always.Catali...
11/19/08 (03:01 PM) 
yeah this was definitely where I was in my head the last few days....numb...I think I'm doing better now though....thank you my ever understanding fish:)...LOVE YOU!!!!

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