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"no future"
  by najah



On my back i lay,
on this lovely sunny day,
staring blindly in to the sky millions of miles away,
knowing at this point of time all my goals will have to be delayed.

My euphoric moments have ended,
how can i be pleased or even elated,
as the pain and emotional feelings creep in,
why i had to be the one rushed to this hospital building.

Now it seems success was not made for me to achieve,
cause after giving that deviant my money, ten stabs i still recieved,
my future is now gone, atleast that is what i believe,
as doctors try to keep me alive on that life supporting machine,
while my mom hold my hand, just to hear the machine go beep beep beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.

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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 (02:35 AM)
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  baby wiggles
08/22/08 (12:54 AM) 
wow ive never expeinced gettin stabbed ten times at the same time but i have been stabbed keep ya head up baby boy nice write it was well written and keep ya pen movin aiight

  DatGuhShawty
08/22/08 (12:04 AM) 
dang...wow I really like thiz poem u did ur thang. 10 stars keep doing u.

  WIZ
08/21/08 (01:04 PM) 
WOW! IS THE FIRST THANG THAT COMES TO MIND. AND IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU HAVE HAD YOUR SHARE OF STRUGGLES AND HAVE COME OUT OF THEM WELL. GOD-BLESS YOU!

  grim
08/21/08 (12:51 AM) 
THIS POEM IS REAL DEEP..I CAN RELATE CAUSE MY MOM ALLWAYS.. TOLD ME I NEVER TALKED ABOUT WAT I WONT IN THE FUTURE..THIS HOT KEEP WRITIN THO

  Lara
08/18/08 (09:10 PM) 
this piece kinda got me tingling all over... this is def a fav, i loved every bit of this pieace. great job poet

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