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"No Drugs"
by DX

Durgs is bad for you
If you are looking for people to be sad for you
So let me tell you what to do there should be no somking
no liquor and many other thing.
So just ask your self do you want
to take drugs are not?
So if you already taking
drug you to stop because you don't
know if you going to see the next day
So get out that bed and
ash youself are you going to take
drugs or not.

Date Submitted: Dec 31, 2007 (03:05 AM)

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'x'GhOsT'x'

07/31/08 (06:02 AM)

It's a good message but you should have made it more clearer and said stuff that could happen to you if you take drugs whats the side effects (BAD ONES) and could have made it longer and more of a stronger and inspirationable message great job other then that ... ya dig

One	12/31/07 (02:11 PM)

I appreciate the public service announcement....the sentiment is felt...what d u to do is get more creative...make ur pieces more personal...show us(the readers) what exactly makes u feel this way...bad experiences either u or people close to u have had...make us feel u instead of chastising like u a parent...I feel ur spirit...I kno u can freak this another way in the future...keep writing...we all(including me) can improve and must learn to properly take as well as dole out critique...much lo...
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terrenababii

12/31/07 (11:26 AM)

your words were true and direct its good to see poems that arent soo sugarcoated but straightfoward instead you spoke the truth on drugs but i think you couldve included some of the deeper, surrounding issues of drugs :] still good poem xoxo ♥terrena

kell	12/31/07 (03:44 AM)

this was hot cuz, you know what it is....i loved it. it had a hot flow and taught a really good message. you keep writing and doing your thing because you are talented and you don't let nobody tell you any different.

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