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"Mystery Machines"
  by One


What the fuck is this supposed to be?

Mystery...

Machines manipulating mandating
Mistakenly manufacturing
Their creations
Replacing love and light
Filling in with fuck and fight
Relaying wrongs with writes?

Scooby snacking stanzas
Scrappy doing nights...

Let me at em!!!!
I'll attack em!!!

Practically pun jabbing e-mc's
Free forming spice from west
Indies flaming hot degrees
With relative ease
Incinerating fleas

Definitely it's my destiny...
Ticking off all dogs...

Always barking up wrong trees
Lifting One's leg up pissing on properties
Actually solving mysteries as phantoms
Pertaining to haunting poetry

Shaggy's scared personally...

scooby doo riddim - bandit productions
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Date Submitted: Jul 24, 2008 (12:01 AM)
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  Jody
07/24/08 (08:11 PM) 
*heal the world make it a better place, for you and for me!!!!!!! lol, can I get my Michael on... stop with the venom... more with the love, were going to the next Michael concert and I expect you to pass out... lol, im just kiddin' but you should know how I feel about this situation already... doesn't take away from your clever use of a chldhood classic tho.

  TRU-IN-DEED
07/24/08 (06:33 PM) 
"Ticking off all dogs"? wow i agree with god of war you might have went over people heads a bit...but that ain't your problem just means the game has to be stepped up..i think that seems to be the theme this month this is what i was feeling when i wrote "escalation" so i can identify easily. Heads like u and fort been saying this for months now. I feel u... Hopefully the movement is begginning. Nice drop. - T.I.D.

  SoulfulReal
07/24/08 (05:23 PM) 
(on the floor rollin)! You sick for this fam! LOL! I remember the Mystery Machine! But ummm yea...the underlying msg is seen...Ill script kid!

  Blakfiya
07/24/08 (12:16 PM) 
LOL.....Ruh Roh! I love it, love the play off the concept, the parallel to current situations, the cockiness...lol. The piss line makes me think of Dave Chapelle though - "I'll piss on you.".

  D.O.X.
07/24/08 (10:21 AM) 
the beginning was ill....i think your could have finished stronger...but overall a good write

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