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"My Vow"
  by Syndel


Today I give all my uncertainty
In exchange for clarity
Which will cradle my ability
To move forward

I give this

Today I trade happenstance
For happiness

My circumstance into acceptance
Abandonment to accomplishment
Forgiveness into atonement

I give this

My beginning my end
My scary days my best friend
My Solitude for a multitude
Of what will be

I give this

My rejection to direction
Awareness into perseverance
I exchange old for bold

I give this

I give in sickness & health
In poorness in Wealth
In life to try
Never to give up never to die

I am giving …..

This face in this mirror
The courage to continue
The journey laid before me for me
The opportunity to be
Better than the day before
To leave what’s behind me behind the door
Kick away bitterness that I have stored

Today I give myself this ring I vow to always love

Me



the wedding Song - Kenny G


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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (04:37 PM)
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  Big Beyonce
08/29/08 (11:47 AM) 
HEY GIRLIE I LOVE THIS POEM IT'S REAL DEEP AND GETS TO THE POINT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND GOD BLESS...._((MISZ POOH))_

  MAVRICK
08/28/08 (02:19 PM) 
very inspirations....thanx

  shaybaby69
08/28/08 (10:12 AM) 
OH my god i have to print this off and frame it on my wall real talk this was just beautiful syn.....man every woman needs to read this sometimes we be too wrapped up in trying to love another we lose ourself in the process this is just beautiful got to favor it

  SoaringButterf...
08/27/08 (02:45 PM) 
Wow! Every woman needs to make this their vow. 10 stars. this was deep and inspiring and uplifting. well done!

  WIZ
08/27/08 (08:07 AM) 
awlll! you have such a pure way of writing and I just love it! ROCK-ON!! HAVE A GREAT DAY!!

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