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"My Time"
  by Styles C


You

Touched me this morning
In a way

I felt

Firmly planted in my position
In bed

Life briefly
Subtracted me

Abstractly bolstering
A surreal 3-D screen

Capturing the meaning
Of multiplicities space sharing attributes

My Back turned to you
Yet… I can feel your heart beat

&

See your eyes blink
Preparing to dive into your morning routine

Swirling comfortably about
Talking about Random things…

I lay prone still advancing on thoughts
as my conscious holds court

-Wondering-

This thing called “forever”
Is really a lie

Infinite time is -absolute- finite time
With no way to rewind

Meaning

I’m truly giving you the best of me

My Time…

Still floating and looking into
This surreal 3-D point of view

Feeling sort of recluse
Recognizing each breath is a gift

If
I choose to talk shit

Or

Applaud Loves presence
Make it the best I have to give

Because the reality is

We’re Dying to live
And at the same time abusing a gift

Figuring time is
Processed and factored in

When

Every other word means more time is spent
So

Allow me this

TIME

To tell you
I Love You

In the best interest of time

Let’s go all in
Turn this thing of ours into an event


Always And Forever - Al Green

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Date Submitted: Sep 04, 2008 (11:05 AM)
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  Juicy1on1
09/05/08 (08:59 AM) 
A masterpiece.

  Unethical
09/04/08 (10:30 PM) 
i have no choice but to fave it.

  Kiyoko
09/04/08 (07:11 PM) 
I got lost in the moment and idea of this one, and the background made it feel Real. Superb job on this one...it had me feeling all warm inside ;-) 1Lv

  .Candice.Renee...
09/04/08 (05:04 PM) 
o great lord must you.... must you si here with this ole i see a forever in your eyes lemme count the pretty ways i love you ass shit! lol. YEEN PIMPING PLAYA YEEN PIMPING! *walks off with a limp shaking head*

  drybaggij
09/04/08 (04:26 PM) 
you ole mushy ass nigga! lol nah hot shit homie. the line bout giving your best meaning ur time... yeah lotta folk need to realize how serious time is. not errybody got a lot...

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