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"My Smile"
  by D1Uadore305
  - This Poem is a response to the poem WHats BEhind THE mask!!! by poetrys poet


You know someone asked me
Why do i smile so damn much?
All i could respond with was a smile because my smile is
MY MASK.
It hides the negativity,
the insecurites,
that ounce of hurt that nver quite wants to leave my side.
My smile is how i survive
day to day.
You see, when I put on my mask,
it seems to make others smile so I keep it on
to hide this face.
Hiding my thoughts,
and my search for the right words to say.
To say to my soul
so I can sleep in peace with my mask on.
You see...
eventually,
My smile wont be just a mask covering something
meant to be hidden.
It will be the surface of "something"-
correction
"someone" GREAT
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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2008 (01:34 AM)
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  H.H. Holloway
09/13/08 (04:35 PM) 
...thus the Adored1 wears a mask of safety as all of us do everyday that we live and breathe...

  poetrys poet
06/15/08 (01:39 AM) 
damn good ass write ma i love this fareal i wanna c more from

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