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"My Proposition..."
  by Ye Cre


Cum you
Cum me
Cum here
Cum see

I'll show you what I mean
I'll show you how I cream
I'll show you nothing wrong
I'll show you all night long

See how I get down
See how I really clown
See how you will enjoy this
See how you will ask for more of me

I want you to feel special
I want you to be careful
I want you to understand
I want you for my MAN

So just let me share the pain
So just let me be on your brain
So just let me take control
So just let me show you my world.

My Proposition...
{Born Date 11-2001}
Thanks for witnessing a Ye CreATION!
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Date Submitted: Aug 05, 2008 (04:27 AM)
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  ButterflyDream
09/25/08 (11:02 PM) 
cute.I love the whole feel of this write,the title,everything.

  JustChuck
08/18/08 (03:49 AM) 
Any man with his priorities straight would accept your offer without hesitation. Simply charming and alluring in the same breath.

  A.C.H.
08/15/08 (06:19 PM) 
I'm liking your poeticv style girl! This poem was tight! Get your show oin! - "the inspired one"

  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/09/08 (11:31 AM) 
Hot sexy sonnet queen. I'll be your man for sure......... But seriously. Great work indeed.............

  11th Wonduh
08/08/08 (11:35 AM) 
has that cascading rhythm when you hear it sung. or in this case when i read it. feels like part of an interlude to the rest of the song

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