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"My Mother"
  by DX


My mother was just getting out of high school
And she knew what she had to do, she was no fool
Off to college was her main focus,
And anything else seemed locus.

She wanted to go to college real bad,
But if she went then her dad would be mad.
Please she didnt have the money she needed,
Got a job at a retirement home, the elderly she feeded.

After her dad discovered what she was doing,
He made her quit and said he was ruling.
Anything she did had to go through him,
And if she didn't stop she would be missing a limb,

So she took all the money that she had earned,
And all of the things that she had learned,
Hopped on the first plane to her destination,
College was something in her imagination.

Then she landed in London town,
Started working as a assistant of boo-boo the clown.
Earned some extra dollars and then she would see,
The answers to all of her long lived dreams.

An ad on a billboard promised money for college,
And she knew that she qualified based on her knowledge.
She applied for the scholarship and she got the money,
Started college, and graduated, and then found her honey.

Now my mother works in the job that she likes,
And she tells me that everything will be alright.
As long as I put God and education first,
Then the world is mine to open and burst.
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2008 (09:37 AM)
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  GOD_OF_WAR_7
08/14/08 (10:53 PM) 
Awesome masterpiece fam. Nicely done. much respect...........

  Ezdozit
08/04/08 (02:10 PM) 
Always taking it to the next level Bravo you have managed to connect with the reader in your own unique way another Ten in my book You are a Great writer

  'x'GhOsT'x'
08/04/08 (01:25 PM) 
Damn you killed this .. This was very impressive for your age .. Smooth flow and a really good story behind the flow very impressed with this one I'm liking it for real 10 stars without a doubt ya dig keep up the good work!

  highoffdasound...
08/04/08 (12:58 PM) 
aww thiz iz beautiful...im sure u learned a lot frm her 10strz

  Critikal
08/04/08 (12:33 PM) 
wow that poem was awsome. the thing that I like about it is that it tells a story and you can feel the truth with in that story, so continue to write the way that you do and it was gangsta

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