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"My Mind is Clearer"
  by Ewe Debe


Complicated by my thoughts I
Stay awake to greet the morning
Sleep replaced by the process of thought
That renders me sleepless
I need a release
Pressure to clear my mind
Thoughts dancing to the melodic rhythm of chaos
Resonating in my mind
Assumptions accompany opinions
While questions silence answers
I need a release
Pressure to clear my mind
Peace replaced by thought’s
Hectic race to draw a blank
Rushing to nowhere and looking for naught
I need a release
Pressure to clear my mind
What’s this I hear
A voice not mine and it’s hushing
The pain in my mind
I feel release
My mind clearing
Chaos replaced now by
The gentle melody of my Savior
A song of promise
I am free
My mind is clearer now
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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (01:02 AM)
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  Stoykes
12/02/08 (10:08 AM) 
nice.......so smooth and serene. i like this. this poem (in my eyes) should be recited at a poetry lounge. i can hear the snaps now. nice job. ~Stoykes

  ButterflyDream
11/25/08 (02:53 AM) 
I loved this,it was so perfectly written.10starzz and a def fave!

  Untouched_Soul
11/24/08 (05:20 PM) 
i love how you bring the words to life

  Ordained Misfi...
11/24/08 (12:05 PM) 
To have a clear mind, is to have peace... I'm glad you found your release

  LyricallyDamag...
11/23/08 (01:46 PM) 
I love this, has this calm peaceful ring to it.. Thanks for sharing this Diva. A definite ten stars from me.a great write to read.

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