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"My Distant Love"
A Capricorn Sweetness and e.f. Collaboration


  Capricorn Sweetness:

I'm sitting here thinking of how much I miss you,
and up to now, I don't understand why I'm so drawn to you...
I urn for your touch, and I wonder day after day,
will I ever get to taste those sweet lips?
Cause right now, I'm dying for some
passionate nights with endless kissing.
The more we talk, the more my feelings for you seem to grow.
I'm becoming highly addicted to you. Damn it boo, I just can't get enough of you...
mentally is fine for now, but If you keep all that sweet talk up,
I really don't know what I might do.

  e.f.:

A kiss you say , how sweet it is to know that our distant love has drawn our hearts together... I'm sitting here thinking of how much i want to kiss thoes lips, and taste your 'CAPRICORN SWEETNESS'. Give me time, and you will see that my love isn't distant at all. I will always be here close to your heart, and i promise never to part. So as i set out to search for your love , ill spread my wings and fly like a DOVE..........untill i reach," MY DISTANT LOVE" .

  Capricorn Sweetness:

The distance of our love could & would drive some insane
but I'm happy we meet online everyday.
It makes me forget about the distance between us
and reminds me of the importance of our happiness...
Just promise me you'll fly to me soon, cause my arms are open
for you and only you.

  e.f.:

For i see your arms out as i land, as i kiss the palm of you hand, feel my silky wings cover you and embrace you... I thank you for giving me a chance, to express my love once more , a "DISTANT LOVE" no more.....
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Date Submitted: May 28, 2008 (01:07 AM)
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  ~Prettysugar~
06/02/08 (01:16 AM) 
wow choco drop!! very senual the both of you!!! i see you! i really felt the vibe in this write poets! 120 proof!

  11th Wonduh
06/01/08 (02:33 AM) 
i felt some chemistry in this write, which to make makes all the difference between a forced collab & a collab that takes time to develop. it had some beautiful & poignant moments in which not only could i relate, but feel

  e.f.
05/28/08 (01:11 AM) 
we did it

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