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"My dear Dahlia"
  by Blakfiya


Be Natural - Fertile Ground
----
Dear Dahlia
won't blossom
listening to my exhausting,
fumes,
returning pure airs,
yet wilting
gathering dust
parched from thirst

thirsting for
the burst of bloom,
I paced the room,
dripping syringes of
distilled water,
bottled feeding,
spritzing, misting
leaves, shedding
light and untangling vines
reclaiming the
buds of my own
life

…transplanted outside,
she flourished

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Date Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 (01:59 PM)
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  11th Wonduh
08/23/08 (02:53 PM) 
such a transitive way of putting things into focus. i got a sense that without nourishment, the flower just wilts and dies, the same can be said bout our mind & soul, as it too needs nourishment and environmental changes or just like the flower, it'll wilt and die. good piece

  getchamndrite
08/22/08 (01:26 PM) 
so fresh!!! its all a process of getting ourself healthy and in the right environment for growth. luvin it as always

  .Jaded Noble.
08/20/08 (11:55 PM) 
personifying a flower... beautiful concept... I loved it... well done

  ...Da RiDdLeR ...
08/20/08 (05:58 PM) 
ha talking about a flower growing & thriving ahhh alas such as a transition in life... cool jazzy song!

  DaRk KnIgHt
08/20/08 (05:28 PM) 
LMAO... DONT COME TO THE CHEIF KILLER OF ANYTING GREEN NAMELY ME.. LOL.. ME AND BLOSEMS DONT DO WELL .... LOL AT ONE COMMENT THO.... WEN YOU SECURE IT THO HIT ME UP , SURE BE INTERESTED ON A FEW TIPS...LOL... DK

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