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"My Dark Pleasure"
  by Nicholas C.


Embracing

and facing

the clouds
of darkness

the world covered in
shade... and placed into play
by the hands of the devil

May I seek to
find cover, or do I just sit there
and let it hover,

passionate in its lightning waves, as it
is red and the sky is black... makes a perfect
setting for a killers murder scene.

imperfection

dark and cold blooded reflection

and a dark deeds detection, the attention from
the darkness kills thou who tresspass through
this whole class.

and then when it
shall rain, the true ruler
and its essence shall chill up... our prescence....

and it is all... my dark pleasure...

07. A knife in the dark - The Lord of the Rings

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Date Submitted: Aug 26, 2008 (04:08 AM)
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  Demon of Darkn...
08/26/08 (12:27 PM) 
YO BRA, WHERE DO I BEGIN LET NIGRITUDE TAKE OVER FOR THE PRINCES OF DARKNESS HAVE STARTED DARE TAKE OVER BID... MUCH LOVE AND YEP ANY TIME BRA YOU WANNA PUT OUT A COLLAB DEN HIT ME UP... DK

  danceluv08
08/26/08 (11:58 AM) 
damn real dark shyt..and ya visual was great for this poem..sick poem

  Bella Poetik
08/26/08 (07:29 AM) 
i enjoyed this "dark and cold blooded reflection" that single line drew in...enticing! argh! you and DK are pulling me into the Shadow...do i falter?

  getchamndrite
08/26/08 (05:06 AM) 
ur mind...labyrinth-like..

  2DAMNREAL..A.K...
08/26/08 (05:04 AM) 
wow...now that was sum real Dark poetry right there...u should check out my Fam Dark Knight...u and him should collabo..i think y'all would rip it up!...but this was by far 1 of the best dark write's i have read in a long time...

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