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"My brother"
  by DX


My cousin name is Keith he is 11 years old
He is silly
And he has a girlfriend name Milly
He love to fix on cars
His favorite planet is Mars
He stand tall for hiself and loves his brother D.J.
This boy name B.J tried to pick on him today.
He said back off right away.
Then when he got home he told his cousin kell
And Kell said stand up for yourself and thats what he did
I respect him for that.
So for all of you that read this write,
And is on this site,
Stand up for youself and realize,
That people can't talk, cause they need to look over their on lives.
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Date Submitted: Aug 02, 2007 (08:00 PM)
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  Syndel
08/04/07 (07:26 AM) 
very well done and creative this is very good are you sure your ten cause Iknow a lot of people who dont have the skills you have good write

  williesidney
08/04/07 (05:03 AM) 
I really liked this one you have a gift 10 stars

  TH
08/02/07 (10:34 PM) 
this was real good for a 10 year old by the time you're in high school your skills will be on a level so high nobody will be able to compeate with you and i mean nobody nicely done i guess the talent runs in the family

  azgoodazitgets
08/02/07 (10:16 PM) 
For your age this shows your talent and I can't wait to see what else you have in store keep it. I started as young as you writing my poetry. Jus write what you feel it doesn't always have to rhyme. Good job.

  Brezzi
08/02/07 (10:10 PM) 
good wirte.10 stars.

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