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"My Adventures to 4th Grade"
  by DX


When I was 4 years old I didn't know what poems was about,
I had no real word scheme and my head was in doubt.
When I turned five I started writing like a pro
I started making words rhyme better than Young Dro.
When i was in the 1st grade, I reaaly liked math,
But I was better in of coase, arts and craft.
When I was in the 2nd grade I was a cool boy,
Instead of listening to the teacher though, I was playing with my favorite toy.
In the 3rd I wanted to be an artist,
But my paintings were always the darkest.
In 4th grade I wanted to be a writer,
But I didn't know what to write about and I didn't want to be a biter.
I am smart as you will see being creative,
Is a part of being me.
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Date Submitted: Aug 03, 2007 (05:57 PM)
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  'x'GhOsT'x'
07/31/08 (06:06 AM) 
You had good flow and everything but you could have talked a little bit more about the grades and stuff other then that 9 stars ya dig

  jerl
08/09/07 (11:27 PM) 
If you write this good already, you will be very awesome in the new future. You are a good poet now. You were born to write, I can already tell. I am going to read all your poetry. 10 stars.

  ClandestineLov...
08/06/07 (05:53 AM) 
this was kinda cut in a way..it made me smile..and kept my attention brought back them good old days:-9 but it was a very good poem and ou are a good poet

  TH
08/04/07 (12:03 PM) 
Nice write you are very talented so keep writing and you'll get better and better

  Syndel
08/04/07 (07:24 AM) 
this was beautiful write your very good I loved the flow and the way you use words very nice

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