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"" Ms. Universe ""
  by That_NIce_Guy


The earth Rotates around your curves

Saturn....

mars...

Venus....

and Jupiter ....

For Uranus is to be worshiped
The milky way....the Key to your fleshly Wrapped rings of virtue

How i

long....

crave....

and...

yearn.....

for admittance into the galaxy you give birth through...like an solar system architect..i view your blueprints....Eagerly to work you

Work you...

Work you...

yes i will....your hair my fingers will surf through
Shooting stars are yet to come baby

but first let me lurk you....

like Armstrong...

before me

Allow me to explore thee

take pictures of your beauty...so i can later adore thee
How i cant wait til the day....you say "Welcome aboard" to me
i'd NEVER leave...FUCK THAT...without you in space i'd NEVER breathe

i swear i wear your smiles on every sleeve....

eyes like blazing asteroids...as you receive me.... i play gently as if with toys
With powerful thrusts...when i hear the universes noise....i try hard to remain poised

Warm thighs....Soft cries....pleasurable tears hit pillows like drops from skies
with compassion in touch I ....lift your legs to a rise

A rise

NO Arise

As i soar deep in your skies....bellow my name....Ms. Universe..yeaah and i shall do the same....You have shown me your wondrous wonders...yet i have also done the same

SAY MY NAME!!

SAY MY NAME!!

As i lay pipe for the first time like new construction of a drain....large scale...Maybe Texas to Mississippi...will be more easy to explain

I Rise

for only YOU

Have time

For only YOU

Think a thousand thoughts a day ...which equals to a thousand thoughts of you

SAY MY NAME!!!

SAY MY NAME!!!

As you come to no end...splish splash splosh...as you sprinkle like acid rain
Scorched be my intimate....infinite....infamous flame

I've counted three shooting stars so far.....your eyes tell me the same
visiting a planet inhabited by karma sutra as we glide to new plains....I Slide into you
from behind..i told you i'm not playing any games...see how much time you've wasted?
laying around with lames....as have I for i have dibbled and dabbled in dames

DAMN!!!

DAMN!!!

DAMN!!!

as i perform circular strokes...i grip.....teeth biting lip....leaning forward into a tilt
i feel you once again about to melt...as i lift the moon with my palms...i hear universe let out a yelp
nothing short of god help.....OUCH..OUCH...Mmmmm....as my open hand leaves a whelp...


Looking...

Looking...

Deeply....

Steeply...
down upon you...i've now shot off into the beyond DAMN!!! who would've knew.....making Love to Ms. Universe...would be so heavenly to do?

Soul Caliber
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Date Submitted: Nov 21, 2008 (01:54 AM)
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  Bratt
12/24/08 (04:03 AM) 
Damn dats hot right there !!!!! i like the way you did that, 10 stars

  11th Wonduh
12/24/08 (03:01 AM) 
i recalled reading this before, and thoroughly enjoyed this to the fullest extent. it bled deep w/ sensuality and creativity. truly making this write an art

  Shalolly
12/12/08 (11:41 AM) 
now i cant compete with that, I think this is one of the best poems ive seen so far, im addin it to my list of favorites, and your getting 10 starz******

  thereelest
11/30/08 (10:03 PM) 
Okay, bottom line. I don't read erotica for personal reasons, one of which would be what I deem the distastefulness of it all. I clicked a link to your write without knowing what category it was under. I must say....you did a SUPERB job. I actually read it, and didn't feel disgusted. Your metaphors were ridiculous. Your imagery, your writing style, everything was Awesome. This was so grown-up, so tasteful. I can appreciate it. Excellent work, excellent...

  Mz.Sunshine
11/29/08 (08:50 PM) 
Hmmm...I was really feeling that...It was beautifully written. I could feel the words as i read it.

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