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"Morning Midnight"
  by Syndel


Have you ever been in a morning midnight
Where your up close to the Am but the darkness
Still surrounds you

Where you reach for the light
But the moon doesn’t allow you
Your left head hanging Blue

Although there is a calmness in the air
Your reminded of struggles thru despair


Its your ……….
Morning Midnight know one up to care

Your silhouette is on lock
Smog crawling body in shock
Blinded by the fog to see
Or an equal chance of being seen

You reach and cannot feel
Is this my life could this be real
Gasp for quick breaths
Questioning your strength

Its your …………….
Morning Midnight know one up to care


Am I a guest of the morning
Or an intruder at midnight
Is this combination fatal
Or my given right to be anal

As my eyes laugh my mind seeking control

Thought I sit in between
The morning warmth the midnight cold
No doubt I am the master of my soul
Who then controls the shadow of my old

Collect me in the morning
Release me due night

don’t let me waltz with the devil
As he drag me tired spirit

Let me kiss the moon goodnight
And await sunshine’s laughter

Its my Morning Midnight
I am up
So am I the only one
Who understands …………

MOONLIGHT SONATA - Instrumental - PIANO
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2008 (09:35 AM)
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  imashine
09/23/08 (12:39 PM) 
This really hit home for me. Its what im going thru right now...You really know how to capture peoples mind with your words. Thats when you know you are a true artist. Much love...

  shaybaby69
08/28/08 (10:59 AM) 
Do you know how many times i have sat out back outside in my chair and just feel wrapped up with these very emotions i swear you got a write for everything i want to say but dont know how to say it i love it

  mindigoblue
08/22/08 (03:40 PM) 
Well written. Very somber and leaving a lasting feeling of melancholy in search of happier climes. I love to hear your abstractions. They make me think. Well done sis.

  Disoriented Di...
08/15/08 (11:47 AM) 
*smiles* a wonderful concept here...the ending was very nicely wrapped up...LOVELY

  .Mase Da Rula.
08/14/08 (10:12 PM) 
dig it

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