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"misery"
  by B.R


Your My Everything - My Instrumental

walking this path of misery..stepping over broken glass
so many questions i want to ask..but i dont i just move right past
and keep fighting for what...to be alone at last
becuz dispite the fight..the damage is still casted
so vast..cant get thru the storm with no mast
so i carry the weight of the world with a mask
becuz im hiding from my past..emotions sturring so fast
waiting to be free at last free at last...so i continue my craft
feelings creating a self inflicted womb bleeding like a bllood bath
as i try not to potentially collapse..
even when i feel i cant speak..i let the pages flap

so many outlets..i choose a few words
poetry is when im heard
where i matured
where my duty is served
when my visions are blurred

misery..is me
paining..long..losing belief
walking in this heat

seems i lost my seat
my throne my home..is now gone
pack up and walk on



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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 (08:46 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 09/22/08 (04:54 PM)
Author: Chainz.
Poem Title: Niggaz Bleed Freesty...

Date: 08/16/08 (02:09 PM)
Author: smooch
Poem Title: look up (response t...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  Chainz.
09/22/08 (04:43 PM) 
yo this is pretty ill im a do a response fa real

  smooch
08/16/08 (02:10 PM) 
wow this is a powerful write but ya know me i gotta hit cha up on this one

  the struggle
08/16/08 (12:00 PM) 
I hear u man, but there always comes the time when it's just meant to move on. "even when i feel i can't speak...I let the pages flap / so many outlets...i choose a few words / poetry is when im heard" Definitely feelin u on that one man.

  DOMINICANPOET
08/16/08 (11:43 AM) 
Man i really felt this piece deep...The song went so well...And i like how at the end you switched it up with a haiku format very unique there ten from me keep em coming

  AR-15
08/16/08 (11:41 AM) 
well now I know someone else who understands, the natures of misery..lol Another deep write

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