Commented on the poem "Unhappy" on 01/07/09 at 06:31 PM
Emotional write,wow alot of good insights/comments on your poem,
You love your children very much,alot of women would grab there bags and bounce,but you remain,your a strong women,God bless you for that ma,I hope everything resolves,my best wish to you,great write
Commented on the poem "It's alright" on 01/05/09 at 04:48 PM
Very nice write,I find this to be inspirational,your words really gave assurance and comfort,another good piece
Commented on the poem "Who I really am" on 01/05/09 at 04:37 PM
Wow..these are strong emotions you showing here,"selfishness,dishonesty that is the life i live with you"....you don't deserve to live like that,alot of good line you wrote,10 stars ma
Commented on the poem "lonely" on 01/02/09 at 04:13 AM
wow,the emotions on here are truly felt deep,you poured soul in this one,10 stars ma
Commented on the poem "death wish" on 01/02/09 at 04:10 AM
Very strong and powerful write ma,your words flow nicely,nice piece