Nickname:southernLady Country:United States City:newton State:MS Gender:Female Age:22 Member Since:Jun 30, 2008 Last Login:Jan 01, 2009 Poems Submitted:47 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:96 Poem Views:1,466 Member Comments:12
awwww; this is precious. it literally reads like true love. i love the way you were able to describe your love; beautiful images (often associated with love and the like) this is a beautiful poem...i really like it.
bless your heart. i can feel your emotions in this write. good job
Commented on the poem "Ice-Man" on 12/08/08 at 10:58 PM
this has to be the best written piece that i have read today. i simply love how you played with words and arranged them in such a way. dude, if there was no tv/cable/internet/etc, i'd soo be lookin for you to , um, tell me stories...you have quite a way with words...this is an instant fav!
i like this one too. everyone reaches that point where they have to decide now what and then take the actions that accompany moving foward. i like this piece, and i like the way you kinda made it an ode, a self confessing contract with yourself to get over whatever is your hendrance and move on..
wow. this is a very deep piece. i like how yo told the story, bit by bit, drawing in the reader. quite an interesting write. it is like soooo real, i can literally feel the emotion as i read it.