Nickname:SoulfulReal Country:United States City:The Slums of State:NY Gender:Male Age:26 Member Since:Jul 17, 2008 Last Login:Jan 05, 2009 Poems Submitted:21 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:164 Poem Views:1,357 Member Comments:8
Commented on the poem "Kung fu fightin" on 08/26/08 at 12:04 AM
lol...Extreme Wit my friend!
Commented on the poem "For The Love?!?" on 08/25/08 at 12:43 PM
The ending was very witty...I'm liking this very much candice!
Commented on the poem "So Tired" on 08/25/08 at 12:33 AM
I enjoyed the journey u took me on with this piece..." can begin to
Complete
A lot more things
Keeping a certain
Member off of
The dating scene
Even if the
Removal a certain feelings
For physical dealings
Make sex possible"
Commented on the poem "Love Letter" on 08/25/08 at 12:19 AM
this had me pulled in from the very first few lines...I likes...I like this a lot!
"Still I was caught up on rising trends
that never topped the pop charts
because pop tarts and multigrain bars raised me
a mind going against the grain
of pop culture and multitaskers
Working a 9 to 5
catching z’s from 8 to 6
all 7 days of the week
but that’s not overtime
that’s life"