omigod this was so fucked up it brought tears to my eyes i hope she got better and went and tried to end his life for being so fucking self centered! ugh imma stop my tirade this weas dope ma keep writing u have a way with words ur words tell a story in each and every piece u pen. not an easy feat.
No it ain't ur fault girlfriend. He knew what he was doing even if u did not. he is totally in the wrong. I can sop identify except i was 4 yrs younger and i'll leave it at that. u never told a soul so i knwo it took a lot of guts to put it out there for all of gs to see. i gave you ten stars i love writeslike this that talk about real issues and nto just surface bullshit keep writing ma.
Dope drop poet i must say you touched on so many issues that I myself have gone thru. let them hoes hate because u don't spread urself for everyone at least u won't be running back and forth to the clinic ya feel ma?Just say no to dust tho the weed thing im witcha but dust nah it cause disassociative disorder. keep writing. iuse to cut too but now i write it is way more healthier.10 stars and a definite fav for obvius reasons
Commented on the poem "lost love" on 11/20/08 at 10:50 AM
ok aside form the phonetic spelling the sentiment expressed here was doep and not all poetry has to rhyme. if u cleaned it up a bit with the spelling and broke it down into stanzas i would love to see how it really flows. sorry phonetic spellign doesn't do it for me but because this was an honestly written piece obviously penned while you were felling some type of way imma give ya 8 stars poet keep writing.
Commented on the poem "Who is he" on 11/20/08 at 10:48 AM
Goddamn syndel tho my melatonin lacking ass probably shouldn't comment on this piece. I am witcha whole heartedly. VEry empowering heart felt read rigth here mamas as always 10 stars and u earned each and every one. keep writing mamas this piece filled me with so much hope and inspiration.
PLEASE FUCKING READ!!!!!!
July 14, 2008 at 07:54 AM
Greetings and Salutations. I am not new to the site I just needed a new name. PLEASE DO NOT SEND ME RANDOM READ MY STUFF REQUESTS!! I will just delete them and never read ur shit anyways. You claim you will return the love but rarely do and I am left feeling cheated 9 times outta 10. Thank You In Advance.
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