Nickname:prolificlydeepfem Country:United States City:Lavergne State:TN Gender:Female Age:28 Member Since:Jun 29, 2008 Last Login:Nov 19, 2008 Poems Submitted:14 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:14 Poem Views:364 Member Comments:1
Commented on the poem "A FRIEND" on 08/13/08 at 07:19 PM
I came acroos ur write today and thought.."damn, I had someone that luvd me like this." Everyday I sit living in a coexistence of a man that doesnt truely luv me. I have been beaten, tormented, pushed so far down that I can still tell u what the carpet tastes like. U my friend are a brave man. U keep luving her, and u stay that friend. Whether she decides to stay or not this is not in ur hands, as u did in ur poem u must give this to God! U remain her friend. No matter how angry u might get never give up on who u r with her! She stays because its now a routine, a habit, she knows nothing else. Believe me what i say. Keep that pen pushing!
Commented on the poem "His Pedestal" on 08/02/08 at 02:30 PM
you know this is a great write! Keep ur pen pushing baby!
Commented on the poem "Reminiscing" on 08/01/08 at 07:28 PM