this was hot, i love the lryical flow of this piece! keep scribin
Commented on the poem "Unofficial Girl" on 11/08/08 at 11:05 AM
This is real, and it happens everyday..some people just settle for less. You have truely spoke on many women today, also on being the Other woman, good write!
Commented on the poem "SOMETHING" on 06/03/08 at 01:24 PM
Welcome to GS, you have a very uniue way of writing I've read a couple of your poems and all make you think outside of the norm! keep scribin poet, you are on a great start
Commented on the poem "HER WORDS" on 06/03/08 at 01:22 PM
very complexed....yet it makes you think!
Commented on the poem "What Momma Says" on 06/03/08 at 01:20 PM
Very emotional write, and beautifully written you only get one so cherish it!