Nickname:MoJoNes Country:United States City:jersey city State:NJ Gender:Female Age:19 Member Since:Nov 02, 2006 Last Login:May 22, 2008 Poems Submitted:39 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:939 Poem Views:6,869 Member Comments:1,544
Commented on the poem "Smoke" on 03/19/08 at 02:58 PM
wow...it sounds like there is a serious story behind this one lol very creative and the way you walked your reader through the sense was on point...i give it 10 starz to start it off...good write keep them flowing
Commented on the poem "outcast" on 03/19/08 at 02:49 PM
keep them coming keep them coming!!! this was a good poem to start on and i'm loving it...keep bringing the bangaz i'm sure you future poetry will follower up with the same greatness
and you mother is so right because Christ is the beginning and the end the maker of all thing and through him all things are possible and if you don't have nothing else you will always have Jesus because his love is forever
that last line got me think there is a part two coming on???? let me know let me know lol but nice write break up are never easy trust me i just got out of an engagement (well actually i'm happy lol) but you get my point
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Commented on the poem "Smoke" on 03/19/08 at 02:58 PM
