Commented on the poem "a night's tale" on 12/29/08 at 07:37 PM
wow, this had my mind all ova the place...it felt like it was cut short...like theres more to be told or more to discover...but it was written really reallly well
wow this held alotta depth...very emotional...i loved the message that was in this and there was underlying strength beneath it as well. its our hard times that make us what we are so in that case, you know you the shit...lol overall, great write
Commented on the poem "A drunk's plea" on 12/29/08 at 07:30 PM
o goodness chil'!!!!!! (clapping all crazy) everything about this was so crazy. the title caught my eye immediately but you definately backed it up. "let me fill you up with sweet sediments and love laced words" i think that was by far one of the sickest concepts ive seen. this is a favorite. beautifullly done ma
Commented on the poem "Sex On My Mind" on 12/27/08 at 11:49 AM
wow this was hott...literally, im hot now...lol but this had a flow that was perfect. piece by piece, you explained it perfectly...and this ending was a great finisher.
Commented on the poem "They Say" on 12/27/08 at 11:45 AM
WWHHOOOHHHOOO! this piece made me feel like i was pissed off for you...i was ready to lash out just because you were lashing out. just because for this prief moment, i felt what you felt, hurt when you hurt, and was lost when you were lost...this was sooo emotional. love is the most complicated confusing thing and u did a masterful at displaying that.
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Commented on the poem "a night's tale" on 12/29/08 at 07:37 PM
