Nickname:Michae-Angele Country:United States City:wouldn't u like 2 know State:CA Gender:Female Age:20 Member Since:Jul 25, 2006 Last Login:Dec 20, 2008 Poems Submitted:30 Average Ranking: Poem Comments:519 Poem Views:4,406 Member Comments:83
haaaa my dudes...ya'll already kno yall snapped with dis shit...hot one...ya'll gotta send me this one too, lol...can't wait till i do my collab wit yall too aiight?? much love 1
No I'm only kidding...This poem is very deep...mental incarceration...nice metaphor for the way that the mind can truly keep one enslaved...I really liked this quote--->"HOPE IS TOO FAR AWAY TO GO ANY FURTHER. "Find it, Carry it, Breath it--THEN Destroy it"....think everyone's been down the seemingly never ending road of hopelessness before... very thought evoking...nice write...quite "decent" lol
I'd tell you how I feel about this poem, but I'm feeling a little reserved...so I'll it DECENT, and call it a day...jk
Commented on the poem "Asthmatic" on 11/27/08 at 01:11 PM
wow, thats so scary dude...you really made me feel the panic and urgency of not being able to breathe for a minute lol...very good conveyance of emotion in this poem...ten stars
Commented on the poem "Where You From" on 11/27/08 at 05:50 AM
Okay okay gotta quote this..."
I’m from a gang that don’t claim coasts or shades of color...A gang that wants to be good fathers to their sons and daughters and not just some more triflin’ baby daddies to our baby mothers... " WWWHAAAAAATTT??!! Its alotta young guys out there that need 2 hear u spit this one my dude...real talk...that some ish to make u think right there...Thank you for this one...ten starz
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Commented on the poem "Collabo - Aint I!!! P.poet -(P.p) & B. Rose(Blakk Rose)" on 12/11/08 at 05:39 PM
