Commented on the poem "I Am NOT A DIVA" on 12/15/08 at 09:51 AM
wow...I dont summon erections to convince you of my sex appeal no, im just a woman, keeping it real telling you what i want and how i feel. That stanza is nice...keep it up sista u have a lot of talent.
Commented on the poem "Dick Sick Addict" on 12/12/08 at 07:52 PM
wow...very strong, good job setting the scene.
Commented on the poem "As I Lay" on 12/12/08 at 07:40 PM
sometimes we think a person is our everything, then they turn out to be merley nothing. Makes you second guess your emotions in the future. as you get older you gone laugh at situations in the past trust me, keep your head up and keep that pen bleeding..one love
im feelin this...it is def hard to deal with something like that, you need that patients and strength in this life, if u dont have that you lost the battle. good write
Commented on the poem "Tired" on 12/08/08 at 12:24 AM
damn shits depressing lol, but i feel u on this..Dudes are always neglecting the one that truly cares for them and when its too late they want you back. Keep your head up ma and just do u, there is no time for pain and sorrow
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Commented on the poem "I Am NOT A DIVA" on 12/15/08 at 09:51 AM
